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Mark Bair's avatar

I especially enjoyed these lines: "I want only good and true words. Words wrestled with. Words that surprise or stun, or slip out sideways, like spring rain, or unbidden tears." When I miss this, my words are calculated for clickbait. You offer a great test: were my words "wrestled with"? Did I let them penetrate, even break, my heart? I can always tell when a speaker has wrestled. The voice slows down, fewer words are said, but oh, do they land.

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Laurel Emory's avatar

Please and thank you. 🙃

And, how in the world do we eat 100g of protein anyway. 😉

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